2 comments on “A Life Cropped Short–A Remembrance

  1. Wonderful post! I like your text a lot — the metaphor is so very appropriate, and you developed it exceptionally well. Reading it left me with a satisfied feeling. I’m sure your brother would’ve liked it too.

    Just a wee note, though: the teacher in me would like you to correct the spelling of “their” in the last sentence. As you know, it should be “there.” And it detracts a bit from your fabulous text. Please delete this part of my comment if you like.

  2. Poets can use words any way they see fit. “sweeping her off her feet, blood soaking broom. He lied in the warmth of their lost love”.

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